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 ## One Class, No Programming Model
 
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 > no binding, no annotations, nothing to transport but the class.
 >
 > New article 🎉 The same edit screen three times: through a RAP business
-> object, straight to a database table, and against a BAPI that has been
-> running in production for twenty years. One unchanged UI class — because
-> those are not three programming models, they are three ABAP statements.
+> object, straight to a database table, and against a twenty-year-old BAPI.
+> All of it with one unchanged UI class — not three programming models, three
+> ABAP statements.
 >
 > What would sit behind your screen?
 >
-> #ABAP #SAP #UI5
+> #ABAP #SAP #UI5 #abap2UI5
 
 ## No Annotation in Between